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Well worth it

Really good, well written story. Keep track of the players, or you will get lost. Would have been great to have a list of them to refer to, but maybe that's just me Thank you for this story, best one yet on this site.

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Well worth it

I love angel/demon stories and read them every chance I get. This one was different and well worth the time to read. I am looking forward to the chapters to come.

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Eager for more!

This story has everything! It is a story of magic and political intrigue, has plenty of players, and just a smidgen I think of romance popping up. It is guaranteed to keep your interest throughout and leave you yearning for part two, which, after such a stunning part one, I am early awaiting. Thank you for such a promising start!

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Battle Fic

Though only 13 chapters, this story had it all: a spoiled prince who has to face a hard future and grow into a hero, a wise councilor who won't give up on him, a fierce warlord to train him and lead his army, a mysterious lady spy, and a younger rival who is yards ahead of where the main character needs to be. All these elements were skillfully woven into a story that kept my interest to the last word. As a personal aside, I could have used a little less of the battle scenes, but they were well written and showed the overwhelming odds and otherworldly character of the foe the prince is facing. I hope the writer will continue this story as it has great possibilities.

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Need part 2!

I love the story, and the writer is very skilled, something not easily found on this site. This story is only the first half of the overall story, and the entire story is found on Ao3, with the same title, but the characters names are different. I have to say, with a story this good, I would have paid for it, and I urge the writer to try and get signed with a romance publisher, so I can give you some money in the future. I hope you stick with writing because you have a real gift. Thanks for the one you gave me today.

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