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A Very Chilling Story

I loved this, it was so eerie and terrifying, especially as it started off so normal and familiar. I loved how she felt like she was disappearing even before it started physically happening - that her boyfriend never got her Chinese order right; that her friend was so busy waffling on that she didn't notice anything odd; that no one had spotted her ear piercings apart from Annie. I wasn't sure if the changes to her body were physical or in her mind, but either way it was horrific, especially when her eyes disappeared followed by her mouth, yet she could still hear. A very chilling story, well told.

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