J. M. Johnson

I'm just a girl following her dreams ❤

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Dear, Annie

I really enjoy this book for the originality -it makes a refreshing change from the usual books on Inkitt

It's been really sweet to watch Annie change as she gets older. The innocent scribbles of a child turn into the thoughtful, questioning mindset of a young woman.

This very much does have a "Little Women" feel to it as Annie tries to find her way in the world as a confident and quite dominant lady whilst still holding together her entire network of family and friends

I think the best thing about this book is its charm - it's not bright lights of the city life and the violence and drama of a fast paced novel. It's a slow build as you grow with Annie and get comfortable with her life. Throughout the years we have not just her story but also that of her parents, her friends and her uncle.

I like the effort that has been put in when it comes to fact checking- such as the prosthetic leg and the tales of the war. It's clear the author has put passion into everything written

Looking forward to reading more and seeing where Annie's life leads

-review written by the Author of You Wouldn't Dare

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The Untold Forest

Wow. I don't even know where to start!
The author hasn't just wrote a book, she's created an entire world to get lost in. Her descriptions are impeccable and from the very first chapter you will be drawn in and in love with The Forest and all the secrets that it holds - whatever they may be

I had to physically stop myself from binge reading this book because I want to savour every moment of it and take my time with it. I think the author knows through all my comments that I just adore Hakken and cannot wait to read more about him. Every single character has their own unique personality, which isn't something you usually find.

One of the best parts is the author interacts with her readers, if you leave a comment she will explain her thoughts behind the chapters and she also has pictures of her world to help picture it.

I love the premise of The Path and how it acts similar to Fate, leading you where you're supposed to go, even if you don't want or know you're supposed to be there. Anything can happen in The Forest

In short, I thoroughly enjoyed this book and I've already recommended it to my friends.

I could honest write for days about it. The author has an incredible way with words and I cannot wait to read the end as well as see what else she has planned. If I could give more than 5* I would.

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I loved it

***The review has been made as the book is still being written***
Grammar - perfect. No issues. 5*
Plot - really intriguing and pulls the reader in 5*
Writing style - small paragraphs, easily read. It's clear who is speaking and whose point of view we are reading 5*

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Off to a phenomenal start

**book reviewed as of the end of chapter 5
Work in progress***

Wow, this pulls you in from the word go!
The storyline sounds really interesting, although I feel a little bad for Knox. I have a feeling he's going to play a bigger part further down the line

I don't want to comment on the story too much as like I said, the book pulls you in and starts with a bang so anything I say will be a spoiler so I'll just leave it with: you caught my attention straight away and I'm very intrigued

Looking forward to seeing where this goes - writing about abuse can be such a difficult genre so I wish you the best of luck xx

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Interesting so far

The story looks as though it has some real potential and I'm looking forward to reading the next few chapters of the authors Werewolf world

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Midnight Rose

I love, love, love the plot to this book! I would like to see some more character development as it moved at a very fast pace, we didn't get to hear much of Samantha's thought process to everything that was going on. I would also love to see someone elses point of view every now and then, just to help build up some emotional connection to the characters

I did feel at times that the dialogue was a bit unrealistic. Sam screaming all the time or immediately calling Trent by another name *****spoiler***** and sometimes you did switch from past to present tense

Okay, enough of that. I loved that Sam was so tough. I loved that she didn't take any nonsense. I would so enjoy reading some more of her time growing up and how her and Taylor had each others back, their friendship was really sweet.

The plot twists had me hooked from the beginning and I loved/hated the cliffhanger at the end!!

As you can see from the rating, the very slight criticisms I had were personal preference and not in any way negative about the book because it was really well written. Looking forward to the next one 😁😁

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The art of seduction

I like what the author has done here - each genre has a very typical "cliche" sort of thing and the author has done a really good job at creating a story around that whilst also being very tongue in cheek.
It made me laugh when he was so simple about his accomplishments, sort of "I'm great because I am". Let's face it, almost every billionaire has the world at their feet and things come easy to them but most authors won't admit that their lives are easy and try to explain this, whereas in this book the author has done the perfect parody of having this cocky, stereotypical billionaire play boy

I'd like to see more of this! For someone who writes werewolf romance books I'd love to see a parody surrounding this as we all know werewolves are full of cliches!

You had me laughing within the first couple of sentences, please continue this I really want to see more!

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The art of seduction

I like what the author has done here - each genre has a very typical "cliche" sort of thing and the author has done a really good job at creating a story around that whilst also being very tongue in cheek.
It made me laugh when he was so simple about his accomplishments, sort of "I'm great because I am". Let's face it, almost every billionaire has the world at their feet and things come easy to them but most authors won't admit that their lives are easy and try to explain this, whereas in this book the author has done the perfect parody of having this cocky, stereotypical billionaire play boy

I'd like to see more of this! For someone who writes werewolf romance books I'd love to see a parody surrounding this as we all know werewolves are full of cliches!

You had me laughing within the first couple of sentences, please continue this I really want to see more!

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Twilight Rogue

I'm only about half way through but so far I've really enjoyed it. Usually werewolf books are about a strong, dominant, powerful alpha.
Leon could still be all these things but he is no longer an Alpha and is constantly fighting his Wolf as he is forced to bow down to someone else, which goes against his alpha instincts. I find this such an interesting twist and I'm looking forward to reading more.

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Mafia raised

I really, really enjoyed this book.

I always find Mafia books difficult to read and write as they can slip so easily in to this cliche universe and it becomes all about the shock factor and abuse, swearing etc and I never got that feeling with this.

Im about half way through (end of part 1) and it's clear the amount of effort put into the plot and the introduction to werewolves and vampires has just begun so I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes

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Scandalous

I adored this book, the plot is just beginning to unravel and reveal a deeper storyline other than just pure lust and sex
Speaking of which, there are plenty of scenes in this book to warrant the erotica label, it's definitely not for the faint of heart!

Looking forward to seeing where this goes :)

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True Bliss

Cute read about a love story between two childhood sweethearts that can never seem to work things out as life gets in the way. Based on a true story, it can get frustrating watching them never able to work things out but that's the way real life goes.
It felt slightly rushed in parts with some grammatical and spelling errors but this is easily overlooked

The author has a unique way of displaying dialogue that, whilst it's not for me, I can appreciate it's uniqueness. I'll admit, it took me a couple of chapters to get used to but I soon began to enjoy it a little bit more.

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Okay

The book has some promise in terms of plot and characters however unfortunately I had to stop reading.
The writing style felt a bit immature, especially when it came to using an asterisk to blank out swears. There was a chapter where you mentioned there would be a lot of swearing and it was literally every other word, which is over the top.
The book could do with a proof read as there are a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes which pulled me out to the reading experience

I will keep it on my reading list and see how it goes over the next few updates and will review again

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Interesting so far

The book only has a few chapters so I can't comment as there's not much to get to grips with, but I liked what I read in regards to the plot
Unfortunately it needs some editing and proofreading. There were parts where words were repeated, it changed from past to present tense and a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes that made it more difficult to read

Will review again once more chapters have been released

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Fantsdtic start!

I can honestly say I thoroughly enjoyed this book. Your writing style is like a breath of fresh air. So far it has flowed so smoothly, nothing has jolted me out of the reading experience or made me confused, it was really so pleasant to read.
I know the pace may pick up later in the book as this review comes quite early on but it was a very relaxing read, the descriptions really helping to visualise everything thay was happening.
You're creating a fantastic fantasy world and I'm really looking forward to finding out what happens next

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Surprised and pleased

This book is not my usual genre but how quickly I forgot that in my enjoyment. The author has a way of describing things that the book becomes bright and vivid , easily able to picture everything that they describe. I haven't yet finished the chapters that are release, but what I did read drew me in immediately. Im looking forward to reading some more :)

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Wow!

Wow! The book starts with a bang, detailing a heart breaking break-up scene, which is a nice set up for the rest of the book as we understand the characters mindset from the get go

I'm interested to see where we go on this journey what the author has in store going forwards.

I have the book saved and will be eagerly awaiting updates

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Interesting

This book had me immediately hooked, which doesn't really happen often with books of this genre. I'm looking forward to seeing future updates. The author has managed to time a perfect balance of fast paced reading but enough descriptions and mystery to make it really intriguing

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Amazing!

I loved this book! I've done other reviews of theirs as well and this book has a similar feel. You can connect with all the character, the plot line and pace of the story is consistent throughout and the twists/cliff hangers were both equally frustrating and fantastic!
Some slight grammar errors and mix up of names but I just stress this is absolutely not an issue, it's easy to see what/who was meant. Compared to a published books, this book is very raw. A published book would have editor after editor take a look, make changes etc and you lose some of the story and that's what I love so much about this author. They have a story they want to tell and it doesn't matter how long the book is or how many characters there are or how many years progress within the story, we are being taken on a journey with them. The books are brilliant and should be published traditionally however I like that they're not and we are getting the authors unedited (apart from their own work) true words come out

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Amazing! ** LONG REVIEW

Sometimes the names were mixed up, but completely understandable considering how many characters were in this book and it was easily overlooked as you are able to connect with each character (more or less) so you knew who the author meant

For such a long book, I'll be honest I fully expected to get bored. This did not happen. At no point did the book feel like it was dragging or the plot feel monotonous and boring. The entire book has kept me on the edge of my seat, some fast paced, some slower paced, it was a really good blend. My heart broke at losing some of the characters, but it was needed for story progression and as much as it was sad, it felt right and in keeping with the direction the story was taking.

For a book that had so many characters, it would be easy for them to all have the same personality, different name. Again, this didn't happen. Im glad there was a "Characters POV" notice each time we changed characters, but if it wasn't there it wouldn't have mattered. Each character had their own personality that shown through.

I love the recurring jokes that appeared. Whether it be each unique wedding ceremony, or Vivian telling awful jokes to calm down Viper, and of course "YOU MAY NOW MOLEST THE BRIDE"

All in all, I loved this book. I would recommend anyone to read this if they're looking for strong female character, love stories, werewolves and loyal mates.

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I love it!

I love this book! Cannot wait for the next update! I never got to read the version before the rewrite so I am avoiding the comments in case of spoilers :) cannot wait to see what happens next

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