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Recommended!

This story is fantastic. I love how the author wrote about two characters who are similar, yet, different too. The concept is unique and creative, I love the suspense it gets in each chapter, and how Alex seems like such an innocent girl but at the same time she has a dark side to her. Can't wait for the encounter of both characters!
I highly recommend this to anyone who wants to read something fresh.

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Dark and Thrilling!

Loving this story!
It’s dark, scary, mature, and gruesome. It has everything that a horror story should have. The author has clearly planed this out carefully. The characters are enigmatic and each character has their own personality. Good job.
I recommend it for those who like a good dark book.

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Exciting!

The concept of this book is original and interesting. The author does a great job in keeping the reader informed and the interactions between the characters are natural.

Can’t wait to see where this goes. Good job author! I shall stick around to read it until the end.

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Brilliant

The author planned this story throughout. I felt the characters emotions and I’m glad I got to read such a good story. Original and beautiful, well done.

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Thrilling

Only 3 chapters in and the author managed to bring shivers down my spine.
Very well written, the suspense is tortuously terrifying and it makes me want to find out more. The camp seems to have strange creatures and Harlow seems to know a few survival rules about them.
Recommended!

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Lovely story

This story was romantic and cute!
I loved this couple, Mary and Honey had some underlying insecurities and I admire how the author was able to put them on display, and how the author managed to make the couple sort out their own issues through communication. It's a short story but it keeps the reader entertained.

Wonderful! 5 STARS

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Very good

I enjoyed this story! It was certainty something new and fresh, and I recommended to anyone who wants to read something different from the usual books.
However, the only suggestion I have is to use italics when expressing a character’s thoughts.
Overall the plot was good and I really liked how Andrea had a strong personality even when trapped in a bad situation. Keep it up author! 👍

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AMAZING

This book left me astonished!
I love how it portrays death in such a realistic way, it even made me think deeply about my own life and how I should cherish the moments, because this book teaches that moments don’t last forever, and death will always meet you one way or another.
The author has a unique writing style that would make any reader intrigued. I felt attached to all of the characters and even more sad when they met their end. But that’s how life is.

Side note: Adam’s story was my favorite.

Good job author!

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Breathtaking

When I started reading this short story, I wasn’t sure what to expect, but the author has managed to move me in many ways.
I love how this story portrays the “eye is the window to the soul” concept. I felt every emotion from the characters and I just kept wishing for Itsuki and Mikael to end up together.

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LOVE IT

I simply love this author.
There’s clearly a huge development of the prince, he’s starting to get “softer” with humans, and I feel like he’ll do anything for Adara.
Certainly worth the read!

CAN’T WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS! ❤️

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Absolutely amazing

I love everything about this story!
First, I`d like to say that I absolutely love the author's imagination for the titles of the chapters, second, I am in love with the writing style too, everything is beautifully described.

Now, as for the plot, if I could give it more than 5 stars I would, because the author deserves it! A unique concept to come by, it felt as if I was inside a fairy tale, full of fun, twists and magic, and of course, a bit of darkness too, it always makes the story intriguing.

I love all the brothers, they have extremely different personalities but they all love each other dearly, and Runa is a great main character! She clearly had some character growth too, she was a timid, poor girl, but strong, and the more she hung with the Sons of Midnights, the braver she became.

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Intriguing

So far I'm enjoying the story, the author clearly planned this story well, the descriptions are beautiful and realistic, and I like how each character is different. Plus, I can easily feel the emotions of the characters which really makes me enjoy this book even more.

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Good

The author did a great job in showing the characters emotions. The MC goes through some struggles and we can see the character improving as the story goes on.
Recommended.

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Good Fantasy novel

The work-building is intriguing and it was enjoyable seeing the characters interact with it, also I love this authors imagination for names. A good read indeed, I recommend this to whoever likes fantasy.

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The shattered Remains

The plot so far is good, the backstory of the main character and the emotions that Isabella goes through are well described. keep up the good work.

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Great

I'm interested in seeing how Keshi`s relationship with Darren will develop. Up until now, the book kept me entertained and expecting the next chapters. Good job author.

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amazing

I like how you describe your characters and emotions throughout the story. Beautiful writing! I recommend this to anyone

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Death and Romance

I like the slow reveals and the addition of romance to the story. The story is about a romance between Joan and Thane, and it starts as attendees of a seminar die because of spoiled food. I like how their encounter was almost like fate.
There`s death, loss, and romance, and they are all handled realistically.

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Thrilling

I don't usually read short stories, however, this one got me hooked. The author did a good job of portraying the main character's personality, it's about Joyce that goes down a rough path of murder. I won't spoil anything here. I recommend it to whoever likes to feel a good thrill.

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I NEED MORE

To be honest, I wasn’t expecting to like this novel as much as I like it now. In fact I don’t even like it, I LOVE it!
Brayden is my fav boy and Damien is so cute and funny in his own way. I literally spent the entire weekend obsessing over this story, I recommend it.
This is now my fav book on Inkitt! Good job author and hope my words will motivate you to keep writing <3

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Good Concept

The story is good. It`s about a man who desires to have a good woman on his side and one day a family on his own, I won't spoil anything here, but I recommend it.

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Fantastic!

I love this author.
This story certainly doesn't disappoint! Everything is well written, the descriptions, the world-building, the characters, just WOW.
It was like watching a fantasy movie, I could easily imagine everything, all the magic, and all the different beings just blended in well together throughout the book! Amazing job author!

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Spooky

The story truly gives me the creeps, I wonder why they killed Cassiel. There's only one chapter so my review can only consist of that chapter. It`s a good way to start and to put the audience on their toes. Keep it up author :D

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Great concept

This story certainly has potential! I love how the author described Sienna`s friends, they are all so different yet they care for each other. The dialogues are perfect and natural, they portray well the personalities of each character.
As for the grammar and writing style, I only found a few mistakes in the grammar, and some paragraphs are a bit too long, maybe just revise the structure of the story. But they aren't big issues, it happens and I also struggle with it a lot :)

Overall, great story! The concept is intriguing, and the story flows naturally through the chapters. Keep writing! :D

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Recommended!

Very well crafted story! I can easily see that the author planned this book throughly and every detail makes sense, the world building is gradual and it inspired me to write better on my own stories.

I won’t spoil anything here in the review, all I have to say is I can’t wait for things to get heated up and to see the MC when she has her power, and I’m highly curious about the witch!

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Gripping story

I HIGHLY recommend this story! The plot is unique and original, I was utterly astonished by the ending and it made me feel a wave of emotions, the author did a great job with the action scenes too, I could easily picture everything that was going on. I love how I can relate to the demons as a human, even though they are supposed to be `bad`, the author showed that demons can feel love and regret just how humans can, that was one of my favorite things about this book. Good job author!

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LOVE IT

I am in LOVE with this book! I'm currently on chapter 20, and I just needed to express how much I'm adoring this story. The author did amazing in describing the emotions of the characters, plus every detail in the book was very well planned. it requires amazing skills to write like this. THANK YOU AUTHOR FOR SUCH A BEAUTIFUL BOOK! I`ll definitely leave another review here when I finish the entire book.

EDIT: Okay so a quick update, I just finished the story and I can’t wait to read the sequel! I think I’ve said everything that I needed to say ❤️ good job author.

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Loving it!

The world-building is great, the writing style is overall good and I'm loving the characters so far!

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