J. P. Garland

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Stone of Vengence

Story is really interesting, like the idea of nobility and royals in a modern setting like this. Well structured and some really good descriptions.

Only faults are a few spelling mistakes, which are easy fixes and not damaging to the plot, and that it was quite short, but that might just be because it's just a prologue so far.

Keep it up, am interested to see where it goes.

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The City of a Thousand Races

Story plot comes across well so far with the current number of chapters. Magnus looks like an anti-hero type of character, which is some of my favourite characters. The plot idea at the moment seems like a simple concept but can easily be turned into something really good, not to say it's not so far. Names are simple but good.

Shortfalls are definitely the spelling and grammar. Simple things like the placing of "", spelling issues of simple words and missing much-needed capitalisations. The paragraphs should also be cut up a bit more.

Hope the criticism can help in the future.

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