Jackie_17

Please check out my books and let me know what you think of them! Thank you!

I am working on the next few chapters I'm just rlly busy rn but I can't wait to finally be able to sit down and write xxx

Jackie, anyone with the courage to post their writing, always deserves some feedback. You have ideas to express and emotions to convey.  To do it properly without annoying a reader, one should take care over spelling, rules of writing and grammar.  You made a good start.  Now, read some good quality writing, such as any of the better published authors and see how they spell, construct, and use grammar.  Numbers less than 100 are usually spelled out in full, except for clock times.  Days of the week start with a capital letter, etc.   

Next chapters soon I hope. Xxx

Just submitted the first 3 chapters of my adventure/thriller story, it would be great if you guys could have a lot at it tell me what you think. 😘