Jalakins

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Incredible

When I first began to read this story, I wasn't sure what it was suppose to be about or why it was classified as science fiction. But I was already hooked. I had to keep reading. This story was very special. First, the writing was very well done. You read from the perspective of the main character Marlia, but the writing style is done in a way that allows the reader to understand much more than just her point of view. I think everyone should read this story. The plot just gives so much meaning to humankind in general, that I think everyone can relate in some way to this story. Incredible read.

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Great Story!

I loved this story. The characters were very interesting and engaging. The plot was very interesting and I had a hard time when I had to stop reading - just wanted to read it all in one sitting! My only complaint on the story is that sometimes I felt like the storyline jumped from one thing to a totally different thing without a smooth transition. Often, I had to go back and read the previous paragraph to try and understand how the jump was made. But other than that, wonderful read!

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