Jamie7359

Reaching out for stars

The story was really good overall and I loved it a bunch! Instead of putting all the conversations in one paragraph, you're supposed to start a new one whenever anyone is speaking. I'm just putting that out there to help you. Either than that, I would love to read more of your writing. Amazing job!!!

The Chosen Ones

This book is one of the best books I have ever read, no joke. It's utterly captivating and one of the most addictive books I've read in a while. It was really engaging and exciting and I loved the mix of romance in it. I want to keep reading more of it because it has my attention, which anyone who knows me good... knows that very few books keep me wanting to read more. These characters will live in my heart and mind, or any reader's, long after I have read the last line. Keep up the amazing work and continue to write more stories, because you are an outstanding writer!

I absolutely love it!!!

When I learned about this book, I was really intrigued by it. I got really into it and read all the chapters submitted without any breaks and in less than twenty minutes. This is rare for me because usually I read a book and take my time, but this one had me itching to press "Next Chapter". I waited a bit before writing this review because I wanted to read a bit more and get to know Ariel more before writing my thoughts. I do have to say that this is one of my most favorite books and I really love the plot and the way everything is going. I hope Ash is okay and that nothing bad happens to him and I hope Ariel and Zane get together because they seem like they would be the perfect couple and they are meant for each other!!! I can't wait to read new chapters and find out what happens!!! Great job and continue the amazing work!!!

Very amazing!

This story was really good. I was amazed by the way Nicci was able to deal with everything happening to her. And It was very heartbreaking when her parents died in the fire. I almost started to cry! I love it and I hope to read more chapters in the future. Great job!

Great start!!!

I love the story and the first few chapters really pull you in and get you addicted to wanting the next chapter. There were some grammar issues, but the story was so good so it didn't really ruin anything. Usually I get annoyed about puncuation and etc., but this was too good to worry. Very great job and I can't wait to continue reading!!!

So far, so good!

I read all of this in like twenty minutes because it was so good. I love these types of stories and I love how kind Jax is being to her. I would honestly recommend this story to anyone because it has a great plot and amazing things happening. Hayley is so strong and I'm so proud of her. I did find some grammar errors, but they weren't so bad that you couldn't figure out what was being said. I sometimes make a bunch of errors when I'm motivated and I'm writing fast, so no hard feelings. It's overall a great story and I can't wait for more chapters! I'm so into it and I really want to know what happens next. Thanks for the amazing book and keep writing!

Wow!!!

So I decided to read this story because I've already been making a zombie apocalypse book and I wanted to know how you were going to do it. Honestly... It's really good. I was surprised when I read it. I only read the first three chapters and I'm definitely reading the rest. I can't wait to continue on this journey with the main character! Very good job!!! :)