Jaywing25

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I really enjoyed the type of description in this story. You described only what was necessary and described the way it was needed. I thought the whole thing with the porter appearing to be very well done, it made it feel like I was watching a movie. Although the thing with the porters carrying knives around did take away from the overall feel of the story, it was really distracting and felt out of place. I still thought it was a good story though.

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