Captivating and scary
The story is slowly built into pure horror. I love the way the bad guy is described. I am normally not disturbed by much, and I actually cringed at his description, thinking I would NOT want to run into this monster.
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Everything is well explained, and the MC's emotions and thoughts makes sense, due to the well thought through background story.
The only this that drags it down a little, is the very long paragraphs as I had to re-read several times because I lost my spot. It's also been a very long time since it was updated, and I dread never getting to read the rest. I also want to know why the story is called Candyland and not Candyman. I need more, and that's why I've given the story a right score.