Jeay S Raven

37 year old mother of two with a prominent creative side. I write none-realistic fiction with a healthy dose of 🌶️🌶️🌶️

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Captivating and scary

The story is slowly built into pure horror. I love the way the bad guy is described. I am normally not disturbed by much, and I actually cringed at his description, thinking I would NOT want to run into this monster.

Everything is well explained, and the MC's emotions and thoughts makes sense, due to the well thought through background story.

The only this that drags it down a little, is the very long paragraphs as I had to re-read several times because I lost my spot. It's also been a very long time since it was updated, and I dread never getting to read the rest. I also want to know why the story is called Candyland and not Candyman. I need more, and that's why I've given the story a right score.

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