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Oh Dear...

Well, the story is very nice... Creepy because it could totally happen what with all the technological advances of modern age, and that's what makes this story hit so close to home because it COULD very well happen. And honestly anyone that would go into a virtual reality where you can create anything with a thought would be nice, yet you gotta remember the nightmares like the animatronics that you created in the story, so in all honesty a virtual reality isn't all that pleasant... I'm rambling... Sorry, the story is well written and very well thought out, I like it a lot and would recommend this story to anyone willing to read a very interesting story.

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Fantastic! I love the addition in the beginning of Jadestreak breaking into the vault. It gives the story a more in depth feel to it about how he got the orb to begin with. More adventure also! At least that's what I believe. Your story is coming along nicely and I believe you could make it into a really and truly beautiful piece of work.

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