Jenessa M D'silva

Hi there. You can call me Jen and I really like writing. Hope you enjoy my novels.

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The story keeps you wanting more. From the beginning you have caught the readers attention. The plot, characters and story development keeps you turning pages. Well done with this but one thing I can suggest is breaking up paragraphs when writing dialogue and taking care of some grammatical mistakes. Other than this it was a really good story and written very well.
Nice one!

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This was a good horror story. The creepy elements are well incorporated from the start. The story is very good as well.
One thing I would recommend is breaking up the paragraphs when writing different events and dialogue. It's a well written story. Good work!

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This is a good story. I enjoyed the characters very much and the story was amazing. You did a good job of writing the characters and the situations they were in well. Loved your writing style. I really enjoyed this book. Good job!

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I am really enjoying this story. I love the characters. Can't wait to read more.

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I liked this. The story was engaging and the writing style was good. Nice work writing this, it was entertaining and fun to read.

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I liked this. I enjoyed the characters and their journey. The plot was well done. But there are a few grammatical mistakes. Other than that it's a good book. Good job.

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This is a really good book. I really enjoyed this. I enjoyed the plot, it was really good. The writing style was great and it complements the plot very well. Overall good job.

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This was really good, I enjoyed it from the start. I love the way you wrote it, especially enjoyed the historical and fantasy aspects. It's amazing read and would recommend it.

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I'm hooked. I really like the way it started and the beginning gets me excited to read more. The writing style was amazing and I really enjoyed this.
Great work! Keep going!

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I really enjoyed the story. Love the way it unfolds. Like the characters and I am intrigued by them. Nice work!!

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I love this. Love the writing, love the introduction to the characters, the style and the story. Awesome job!!!

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I like this book. I like the way it started and how the story develops. I like the plot. I find the way you wrote it interesting. Good job with your first novel.

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I really like this story. I like it's pace and characters. Can't wait to read more. The style of writing and characters pov is interesting. Overall good job.

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I really enjoyed it. I loved the characters, especially the main character and her relationship with her family. it was truly beautiful and the story was lovely. The story was well paced and moving, it took some nice turns as well. Overall amazing.

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