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hiya, i'm jessica. I am a romance novelist. I love books about romance and I also love writing them (even if there not good, it just for fun). my writing isn’t great. Xx

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it was very good

i loves how the plot is so far, and i can tell that this story will get really good. But throughout eac episode you want to draw the reader into reading more of this and im not sure how youll do that with episodes if they are all this short. because for me personally i get bored by short episode so i need to read long one. in my book yes the episodes are short but its my first story and they do get longer so im sure yours will. very well done.


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