Jocelyn

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I. Am. Me. Seriously. I am a Christian who knows how to defend my faith. I love to write. If you message me, I'll send you my Wattpad and Quotev accounts.

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Squeal!

First of all: alsnfbsksoshbanskdidbsbsndlcijsns
Second: I really love those sentences that had the "she was" at the end. It really help make the entire thing surreal and set the mood. I don't know what your plans are for future writing, but if you decided to write more than a one-shot, you could write the one-shot and add various chance meetings. I'd like to see more indirect characterization, but that's a difficult thing to learn (something I've been working on myself). Keep writing! I want your autograph for when you are famous one day!

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Fantabulific!

I think this story is so honken bruce! I appreciate all the hilarious points made, like spiders not having feet and all. Love it

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I'm Impressed

First of all, I've not been allowed to read the series yet and I understood what was happening perfectly. I understand more of how the main characters of the series tend to interact with each other and I was able to spot what you had to change in order to create this plot. But, the change still works well and makes sense! I didn't catch any grammatical errors, either. I really like how it started right off the bat describing how certain events have affected Hermoine and painting her different friendships and worst fears. I'm really impressed by your work!

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Squeal

I read the entire thing this afternoon and it was so honken bruce! I like how the story was presented and how the plot unfolded was truly majestic. Thanks for writing this, I loved reading it!

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Yaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!

First of all, I really enjoy reading this! As someone who only read the mainstream Percy Jackson series and not the follow-up series, It's very easy to understand and follow. Keep up the outstanding chapters!

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Practically Perfect

I absolutely positively love this! The writing style is fantabulous and hilarious. I barely noticed a singpe grammar error, too!

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Good Job

I really enjoyed these poems. They are a little darker than I usually read, generally because I am a light-hearted person to most people, but I still connected with them in a way. There were a few grammar errors, but the don't really confuse the flow of the poem. Great job.

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