The_heroic_legend
@Joshua54Anguilla.
in relavent terms i am a kid with an intention to be great. what i mean it than i will not give up a goal i try to start.
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wow
that story really moved me it reminded me of a movie. there were a few errors like you said the father's fur then the mother's fur
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amazing
this is an amazing poem I love the imagination. and where I come from my tradition enjoys poems of the stars. keep it up and don't give up. soon this poem will be published
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intresting
I loved the main idea and every thing but the plot was a little bent. but don't give up and it will be published
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