JoyNaval

call me beep me if you wanna reach me if its 3 am and you want some feels hit me up in the place to be lol

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Has potetial

It has potential. The grammar is good, especially since you’re writing in Tagalog, I think you are doing out language justice or even trying to. Others are too ‘bara-bara’ when using it. They don’t adhere to the grammar rules anymore or maybe unaware that rules even exist.

As for the dialogue, I genuinely thought that Typhoon is gay. Like for real. Then you mentioned that he’s a womanizer of sorts? I can’t believe it. Maybe if he was using that language with sarcasm. But you showed no sign that he’s being sarcastic.

Also, this seems very run-off-the-mill in love with your best friend kind of story but as I said it has potential, it all depends on where you would take it.

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