Interesting Short Read
The story is interesting and steamy. Only a few things throw me with this. It says he works there but he actually doesn't. It's a sex club where people are actually paying others to find them people to have sex with so they don't have to go looking for it just anywhere. Also her skin tone changes in the story. There's also the lack of explanation on why Troy tensed up when she called him by the name and if that is actually his real name or if he is in fact playing a character. And I think a big thing bothering me is the fact that no protection is used. I mean I get she's a virgin but he's obviously not and what about unwanted pregnancy?!. And is he really 44 years old? They paired him with a recently turned 18 year old virgin?! That's insane! And a HUGE age gap. Which may bother some, so a warning would come in handy.
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I'm truly loving this story and can't wait for more! It's dark, but not so much in the way you'd originally think which is my kinda read! Female lead, Scarlett, truly is a bad ass, which I adore! I hate the ones where it's claimed she is but she's really not and allows herself to be pushed around and used as a doormat. -The obedient, softy, that bends, jumps and does as told make me sick!.- Not in this story! She fights back, even against the male lead. Love the "secondary characters" as well. Malachi and Damian have been great, and this story has you rooting for them. Killian, the male lead, well he pisses you off and you want to reach in the story and beat his ass, and yell at him yourself, most of the time so far. We're at chapter 17 thus far, and I can't wait for the author, Lotusflower, to update with more! I've already read this much of the story three times because I just can't get enough! So if you like truly strong female leads with dark elements, a bit of BDSM, a bit of danger and intrigue, as well as vamps... Go read this story! Hell, GO READ before I let slip spoilers lol.
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