I read this story on the author's website and it's is one of the best fanfictions i've ever read. The voice of Kimberley's Jack O'Neill is just incredible, and even though this is another universe the humor of the show character was still there.
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The plot dragged a bit occasionally when the romance took over. I would have loved to read more about the universe and world like the Aschen war with the Goa'uld, and the resistance's efforts. After all they have been fighting the Aschen for over a hundred years? So what were they doing? Apparently they didn't get very far?
Still, excellent story that pulled me right in, as evident by my desire to learn more background. Recommend this to everyone.