Just_jason

Salem

Currently, they are working on creating blog posts, fiction stories, novels, audio books, and more.

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Sorry for the 3 stars

I loved the concept of the story a lot. I just thought there was too much telling and not enough showing in this piece. While the overall concept and plot of the story was unique and cool, I thought it was distracting to read everything in an almost list format. With a little tweaking, this could be amazing.

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Great

I think this story is very good so far. I think there is a lot of telling instead of showing involved in it which I would change but overall it read great. You have a unique voice.

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