KLJenkins

Lucy

You have a great first-edition plot written down so far.
Some sentences were worded in a difficult manner which with editing and proofreading will sort themselves out. I think your story has great potential and a great plot. You're doing so well and I cannot wait to see you evolve and read the rest of Lucy as you drop your chapters :) x

Highly reccomend, absolutely amazing x

I’ll admit I was never much of a horror/thriller reader before my mum asked me to write a book with her. Since then I have been finding books to read and let me just say I am so glad I have come across your work.

This story is nothing if not extraordinarily amazing.

I love the detail in which you have written each page. I love the relationship between the two main characters because if research has shown me anything murderers can and do have relationships whether they are seen us socially abnormal or not.

I cannot wait to continue this book as you write, to see where you go with the story.

Well done on writing such mastery :)

Helping Other’s

This story has captivated me from the first chapter and now I'm left wanting more... I love how you reeled me in. Good job x

Suffer In Silence

Loving the storyline so far and I love how in-depth you explain the atmosphere. Cannot wait to read more as your drop those chapters x

Breathtaking and utterly relatable.

It’s sad to say that this could very well be a real and true story.

Suicide affects more than the person taking one’s life and from my own experience being there when something like this happens it is gut wrenching.

I love your story already and it’s only just begun.

Well done, Ann! x

Has me immersed…

I only started reading a few days ago but ever spare minute I have I have added another chapter to my read list.

You are extremely good at constructing a story and describing the things that need to be describe.

I’m in awe of your writing and will continue reading.

You have a bright future ahead of you and I don’t doubt this story will be for sale soon.

I highly recommend Raw to everyone, you won’t be able to put it down x

What a great start to your story…

I’ve thoroughly enjoyed reading the first few chapters of your story.

The way you construct your sentences and have each roll into the next is awesome.

I love the detail yet you don’t over do it whilst also keeping us wanting more.

Also love the pirate theme out on sea. I haven’t read a book like this for a while and this is refreshing for me x

Punished...

Love, love, love your work. You write impeccably and its a shame I do not have more time to breeze through your books but then again, that will only mean I'm submersed in your world for longer x

Legend of Mona

So this is not the type of book I usually read but the first chapter intrigued me and now here I am three chapters in waiting for more.
Would definitely recommend, I love your writing x

Great Story so far!

Loving the chapters that are released thus far.
I haven’t read a vampire book for quite sometime so am looking forward to your take on the vampire world.

Excellent start to your story.

Love the two chapters so far, you’ve given a great introduction to your story.
I hope you continue x