KRM

Hello everyone!!!! I love to read and write and will review one of ya'lls stories if you would review one of mine once i get some writing done.

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Amazing story

You have a really amazing story here. A great new twist to the legend of Vampires and i loved it. You do have some punctuation problems with quotation marks but other than that your story is very very good.

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A good book

I loved the book. You have a amazing plot and the story overall was very good. But the reason why i didn't give you five stars on your technical writing skills was because in the sixth paragraph of chapter 4 there is a mistake with the quotation makes on is facing the wrong way. it says "....... our doing " Aunt Vera began..." and the quotation mark between doing and Aunt Vera is wrong. But other than that you book is amazing.

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