K. Blacke

Just a girl trying to get her work out there and improve her writing. I love riding horses, and I am always up to read a good book! I hope you enjoy my work!

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Wow. Just Wow.

Holy freaking cow. I've read a lot of books. Like, a lot of books. And most of them were pretty good. But every now and then you come across a book that just surpasses every expectation you had and raises the bar for all other books until they all seem mediocre in comparison. You know the one. The book that makes you furious when you've reached the end because you don't want it to be over. The one you stay up way too late reading because you can't put it down even when you know you are going to severely regret it in the morning. The book that makes you want to straight-up call the author and be like GIVE ME MORE!

This is that book. It was absolutely incredible, and I'm really not even a big fan of horror. It drew me in with the incredible imagery and unexpected twists and turns in the plot. The characters were so well thought out and developed and the writing style was absolutely superb. Honestly, I can't think of anything that could be better about it.

It's not even finished yet and I can tell that it is going to be something really really special. So, please, keep up the great work.

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Off to a great start!

This review was written after chapter 11, as the story is still a work in progress.

Oh my gosh. This story blew me away. I was drawn in instantly, and I absolutely loved the plot. I can't wait to read more! The dynamic between the characters is flawless and the author's writing style really pulls you in.

I had to look really hard to find something to critique because the story was so well-written. The one thing I have to say is that there were a few grammatical errors throughout, but that is expected from a work in progress.

Overall, this is a great start, and I look forward to reading more.

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LOVE IT!!!!

This book drew me in from the very beginning and never let me go! I won't spoil anything, but you're definitely going to need a box of tissues for this one. The good moments will leave you smiling from ear to ear, and the lows will leave you in a puddle of tears. This book will take you on a rollercoaster ride as you are drawn in by the incredible detail and extraordinary storyline. The author did an amazing job building the characters, getting you immersed in the plot in a way that will make this book stick with you long after you have finished.

The only criticism I have is that there are a few grammatical errors throughout the book, but not enough to create a distraction from the storyline.

This book definitely leaves you wanting more, and I cannot wait for the next one to come out!!

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Very well written

This story, although unfinished, was very well written. The author's style, as well as the interesting plot, really drew me in. I hope you update soon! Keep up the good work!

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Very good story

I really enjoyed the story and the author had an amazing style that was very unique. There was, however, quite a few grammatical and punctuation mistakes, but those can easily be fixed with a little editing. Overall, I thought the story was a very great read! Keep up the great work!

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Enthralling

Holy cow. This book was amazing! The plot was enthralling and the twists were amazing! The dynamic between the characters is so interesting and well built, and the imagery really draws you in until you feel like you are with the characters in the book!

I can’t wait for more updates! Please, keep up the great work!

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I need more!

This book drew me in from the first chapter, and I absolutely loved it! The detail and description pulls you in until you feel like you are experiencing the scenes right next to the main character! And the plot completely leaves you hooked and wanting for more. I honestly looked for things to critique and improve throughout the book, but I couldn't find any! I can't wait until the next update! Keep up the great work!

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Good start, but needs some work

**This review is of the unfinished book. Up to Chapter 5**

The style of the book was interesting, with song lyrics, poetry, and other elements added in to make it unique. I also thought that the storyline was interesting, but the errors in grammar distracted from it. The book definitely needs quite a bit of grammatical editing, but once that is done I think it will be a solid start. The characters are very unique and the storyline seems very well thought out and intriguing.

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