As this review was written while the book was still in progress, I will be happy to come back later and edit it once the book has been completed. Up to this point, I was really impressed at the interesting plot and great character development, The dialogue, and other character interactions really drew me in and I enjoyed following the story.
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The only critique I have is that there are quite a few grammatical errors throughout the story, and it got a little distracting. (This was the reason I gave it four stars). However, once those are cleaned up, there will not really be much to improve.
I really enjoyed the personality of the characters and their funny remarks. The author did a great job hooking me, and I can't wait to read more.