I can't wait for people to read it.!!
Read the story now
For me a good book is something that I want to devour in one sitting ,that makes me want to know what happens next and one which I can relate to.
Lets start from the beginning,The cover is beautiful .The plot is something new and interesting that I haven't read before.Eli and Nina are the characters that I feel are alive and maybe living in some alternate world.Their everyday life brings us closer to their characters and make them more real.Author has done a great job in connecting the story line.It flows beautifully from one event to another.We are left guessing as to what will happen next and that right there is what works for me.Introducing the murder plot is very clever on the author's part because we can enjoy two genres in one story and that is really amazing,
So all in all I would like everyone to give it a go and decide for yourself.
For the author-
My only suggestion is that please go through the chapters once you are done with them and do a quick revision of it so as to avoid any grammar or spelling mistakes that can offend or hinder the reading pleasure of some readers.The chapter length can also be altered.(maybe).That's it.
Keep up the good work.