Kendra Newborne

Just an anxious human, logophile, and part time super-nerd. Writing is kind of my life so thanks for taking the time to visit!

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A Treat For Any Fantasy Lover

“The Light of the Sun” is a book that captures the reader almost instantly. It has an interesting setting, plot, and lively characters.
One suggestion I may give is take more time describing these characters. It felt like a lot of names were casually tossed into the story and I didn’t know who they were.
Though the story isn’t completed, I would recommend it to any and all fantasy lovers. “The Light of the Sun” will leave you itching for more.

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Exciting So Far!

An earlier review mentioned some grammar issues, which is why the technical skills only have four stars. I can't wait to see where the story goes from here, it's really gripping from Chapter One!
I would like to know more about this world (so... world-building??). Is it a future of our world? Is it something else entirely? Be sure to have strong background.
Keep going! It's great and worth continuing!

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