Urban Key

Mammoth Cave, KY

A former long-term role player who is working on his own stories. A geek who loves technology. I'm here to help others and improve my prose before I publish my first novel.

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Solid Potential

It was a good introduction. I enjoyed the instant mood and tone of sorrow, which stayed solid from beginning to end. I personally asked, myself, "If she has to leave Earth, then what is she really?" "What is Erisua like?" "Who is the boy that she is grieving over and why can he not travel with her?" The writing style is clear and precise, bringing vivid imagination to the reader while allowing them to imagine the landscape granted through the detail.

I wish to see how the world-building of this book is going to be! I've been waiting weeks for the next chapters as I wanna explore the universe within the story you are delivering to us. Keep up the great work!

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Great Enjoyment

I have yet to finish this story but I have become absorbed into it. I find the elements used in a way that I haven't before. The MC is an elderly person, something that isn't usually seen in writing. The events that I have read thus far are dark and grim, as expected out of a man who was once in the army. I plan on making another review when I finish writing but this is a book I would definitely recommend to my followers on Twitter, despite this being relatively short.

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Luma Review 1

The story structure is decently well built. Jumping right into the action from the get-go and not holding back any punches in detail. It relates to high school from what I got. In a way, it reminds me a bit of the movie Grease. There are some easily fixable grammar mistakes here and there. However the story itself brings out the emotion. However the consistent use of telling the reader through the same simple word can get tiring. Not much else to say but I am interested to see where this story goes. Keep up the good work!

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