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When Breaks The Maelstrom

Your work is beautiful. Your use of prose, the plot it's all just beautiful. Two chapters in and this is my favorite book already. You reminded me that I still have ways to go.

The closing remarks. The switch between characters, like man you are really good.
Man, thanks for giving us this piece.
This is art.

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Tangled Desires

There are a few grammatical errors but that's about it.
Everything else is quite good.
The flow, the description and the way the different characters are introduced. It's just perfect. I love it.

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May I Alpha?

I like the possible directions I'm seeing. I don't really understand the plot though. I think it's about love and taming the alpha.
Some things seem rushed like the explanations he gives Ana. I'm in the loop on that. I feel like she isn't paying attention, if that is the goal then that's fine.
All round I think your book has potential.

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