KittyCatWriter
@KittyCatWriter
“We were given: Two hands to hold. Two legs to walk. Two eyes to see. Two ears to listen. But why only one heart? Because the other was given to someone else. For us to find.” -Lauren Child
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Five Words
I'm going to start out by saying that the word choice and description in this is amazing. It makes the story flow beautifully, and the author has such an awesome writing style that it makes it fun to read. Also, this is the kind of story that I could easily see put into a book with very little editing added because it is something a professional writer could write. The plot is great, the writer is great, and because of that, Five Words is a great story.
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Good job!!
You did an excellent job with the plot on this. There were a few spelling errors, but that is expected since it's a new story that you just put up. I look forward to reading more of this, it seems like a good start to an awesome story.
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