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I should start by saying that I'm not a fan of horror, as it goes. However, an author friend was reading some work of mine and I am dutifully returning the favour.
I think the story is well-paced and I like the writing style There is good use of language, which is difficult to achieve in such a small piece.
I also like the twist at the end. Makes me think this could be a part of a much larger story if the author so desired.
All in all, a great little piece of work. I'm looking forward to reading more from this author. Well done!

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