A Journey of Fajro
This is a paranormal book dealing with vampires. If you are fond of mystery, this one is for you. The character of the protagonist's father was kept as mysterious. Like why does he spend time with his child? How he dies? All these questions will arouse your level of curiosity to a greater extent. However, I do feel use of punctuations can make the book a great piece. Punctuations is an essential part, and throws an overall impact on the hook like how do you want your readers to read the lines. It helps in providing a better experience. In my opinion, a basic introduction like providing the physical appearance, name, or at least the sex of the protagonist can make the whole thing more interesting (to be honest, I was confused about the gender of the MC). You are doing great, but I think dialogues can be more smooth. You can proofread your work a number of times before publishing to avoid the mistakes. And, you can also check out books from very professional authors to get a better idea (best option). All the best in your journey!
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