knightedKitty

@KnightedKitty

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More please!

Nooo I caught up! I'm loving this, I normally don't like when chapters change POV to the male leads, but this really works, you're a great writer and I cannot wait for more ahhh, please

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Spicy!

Great start, very hot ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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This is a great start!

Interesting premise but the lack of punctuation is a bit rough, if you fix it the story could be great!

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Tysm!

This is a very insightful and very thorough insight on how to use and make the most of inkitt! Thank you for your efforts I really appreciate them.

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Wow!

This story is so hooking! I cannot wait to read each new chapter, I can imagine each character so vividly that now I've reached the latest chapter I miss them :'), one of the best harem series I've read.

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Cant look away!

At first I thought it was a lot, a little dark for my tastes but it grew on me and now I can't look away, the author's writing style and sense for drama just keep me hooked. Writing this good, deserves the recognition, if you like dark erotica it's a must read!

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Very dominant.

This story is pure smut, it is great if you are looking to enjoy yourself ;)) The waiting was so tense, I was so frustrated! In a good way.

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