T. M. Luna

𝐈𝐧𝐤𝐢𝐭𝐭 𝐀𝐟𝐟𝐢𝐥𝐢𝐚𝐭𝐞 𝐀𝐮𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐫

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Grammar & Punctuation

Grammar is just as important as the story

The plot of the story of where it's going is interesting, unfortunately, it was difficult to understand a few sentences due to the fact that there are multiple punctuation, period, comma and grammatical errors. So it made it challenging to keep up with what was going on, some of the sentence were longer then they needed to be. And some phrase didn't make sense. I personally never read this type of genre of murder/mystery. But you asked me to review your story, and I wanted to keep it fair by reading at least 10 chapters. And although I do find the plot very intriguing and eye catching, there are some mistakes that should be addressed. Overall, I am happy with how long and how much time and effort you put into creating this story, keep it up and don't give up on your writing :)

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