𝙺𝚛𝚒𝚜𝚝𝚕𝚎

ROLLERCOASTER!

The shocking plot twist! Oh my days. Lovely storyline, excellent grammar. Overall, a fine piece of recommendable literature Well done Author!

Skillful

The storyline flows smoothly. Very interesting plot and I was kept on edge. The plot twist was nicely done. The author did a good job in the grammar and punctuation aspect as well. I'd love to read more of this - breath of fresh. Kudos

Intriguing

I must say ,the story is a very interesting one and i love how the writer harnessed the plot. But there were inconsistencies eg. from bearing Damon to answering Ian , Also his surname changed at some point to Carlyle etc. i hope this mistakes,are corrected but for the rest ..its a,good story . Well done♀