K.R Webber

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Great slow burn mystery right there.

I am not much into slow burn mystery stories but this hooked me. The prologue was really well done. Even though the first chapter was slow, reading about Terra was great. And the chapter after that was suspenseful.
Carptenter seems to be a very interesting character as well. But I am enjoying Terra's storyline more.
You have done a good job in creating mystery. The story feels atmospheric.
But the use of present tense left me confused few times.
Overall, the idea has potential. If you speed up the plot in upcoming chapters then this story may become a nail-biter.
Good job.

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Very very interesting!!

Whoa! I was surprised by how fast paced the story turned out to be. I was expecting crime scene observation, chit chat with officers but no! It dived straight into the plot.
I really like what you did there.
Winter looks to be a very mysterious character. His lack of empathy makes him somewhat scary.
And the way you have described Winter's body language, it makes readers feel like they are the one interrogating him.
Short chapters made it easy to read. Pleasw don't complicate the plot in future.
Added it.
And followed you.
Keep it up. Good luck.

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