l. Bellamy

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A story of faith and strength!

I truly enjoyed this story. The plot is original and enticing, building tension along the chapters. The characters are well-rounded, imperfect individuals, growing at each challenge and uniting at every turn. Descriptions bring you right into the story and the dialogue flows into a real conversation, The author does an excellent job creating a storyline of constant faith and a will to believe.

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Originality!

From the choice of the title, the charcter names, the scenes, and the storyline, everything is purely original and fresh! We follow this small group of 'envies' through their training, their fights, the dynamics of their friendship. I like how the author writes bits of their background in each chapter without overwhelming us with too many details and long introductions. The characters feel real, each with their quirks, mistakes and personality traits. The dialogue is interesting and the descriptions are on point.

Great job, I'll be following!

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My personal opinion

I don't usually read bdsm and masochistic stories because I don't particularly enjoy them, but I will try to give an unbiased review on this story.
The prologue effectively describes the kind of story and plot you are getting into, the characters and elements of the scenes follow the bdsm theme. For anyone who likes to immerse themselves into a story of submissiveness and strong bdsm narration, I would recommend you read this story.
I would suggest separating each dialogue when a character is speaking so their conversations don't end up in one complete paragraph.

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An exciting read!

First of all, I love the originality of the name 'Haven'. The author takes us along Haven's life, from the child within the struggles of her family structure and through an endearing friendship. We see her grow into a strong woman, surviving, fighting, and falling in love. Each description vividly takes you into her mind and her feelings; at times riddled with hardship and at times sweet and romantic. A journey of strength and growth between the characters—and a hopeful ending of a story that shall continue.

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Lovely

The descriptions are a bit lengthy for my liking, but once you get past that you find an endearing story of two people who should be together but that life has had a way of bringing them apart.

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