LDTK

Historians will say they were very good friends.

Each chapter is loooong, I'll be there scrolling with no end ^^ Waiting for more

Waiting for more

Refreshing idea, good storyline, nothing too dramatic, somewhat predictable. It's not complete yet so still waiting to see how it end.

Good reads

The timeline is made specifically clear, down to the hours, which is not usually seen; it does help with following. The characters' backgrounds are pretty sad; some scenes are funny --> a good combination for my read. Some plots are unclear/confusing, but the story seems not yet complete, so I hope those get explained later.

A strong, "outside the box" premise that strips away sanitized mermaid tropes to deliver a gritty, primal predator whose internal struggle is genuinely compelling.

The thematic tension between a possessive merman stalker, a profit-driven human crew, and the concept of "kindness as a leash" establishes a brilliant psychological anchor for the romance. However, the manuscript’s impact is heavily diluted by extreme paragraph fragmentation.

An interesting twis from the movie

The movie was one of my top favourites, and your story brought a good twist to it. I've always wished more for Kushi, like yes ofc she had the love of her life, but maybe something on the side (like other achievements) would be great :3 love this twist

plot good but uncompleted and grammatical errors

This story is incredibly captivating! The plot is fast-paced and kept me on the edge of my seat from the first chapter. The grammar is generally good, but there are a few recurring punctuation errors in the dialogue tags that can be a bit distracting.