L.L. Sanders

Buckeye, Arizona

Leslie Lee Sanders. Artistic, rare INFJ personality, introverted, intuitive, empathic, inspired by highly motivated and creative people! Wattpad: @LLSanders

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Believable protagonist!

The story is engaging so far! The emotions are relatable as Francine feels trapped in a job and a relationship she doesn’t really want to be in. I think many people can relate in some level. I enjoy her people watching as it lends to her personally and the description of the setting.

The writing is good. There are a few grammar errors but nothing that can’t be overlooked and nothing too jarring.

The LGBT angle is a breath of fresh air. I usually enjoy stories with the leading male characters being part of the LGBTQ community, however, I find the female lead to be quite believable and so far subtle, which is a good thing.

Good work!

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