LLuvia

Hi All! Im LLuvia and I am a new writer! I am a momma of 5 chitlens from 4 to 10 lol. so my pleasures to escape the madness is reading! i hope to write great things myself

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so much potential

This story has a lot of potentials, and I feel with some more editing because there are a lot of grammar, punctuation, and run-on sentences that need attention and perhaps help from someone whose first language is English; this story would be perfect. It has you wanting to know more, what will happen next. Great job so far, keep up the excellent work.
P.s I use grammarly.com to help with my editing! You should check it out!

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