I was hooked!
It took me probably a full day to read, because after one chapter ended, I wanted to see what was going to happen in the next.
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I think my favorite aspect of it, was Riley, and how rounded she was. I think the growth of her character was very well-shown, The way that she was frightened in the beginning, and then she was strong, but that she didn't instantly change and become strong, how, even when she was with Dean, her fears about her old relationships popped up. I loved how well-rounded she is,
Dean was another very well-rounded character; I have to admit, I really liked the fact that Riley learned about him little by little, story by story. It was a good way to learn about his past, without overwhelming the readers, and, incidentally, made me want to read the next chapter, and learn more about these characters.
I think it was a really great book, and I look forward to reading more of your work.