LadyGrayish

New Jersey

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A great twist to the story

Having enjoyed Merlin when it was still on TV, I heartily enjoyed this version that ended much more happily than the show. The characterizations were just right, and I particularly liked the subtle references to the final battle of the show, the echoed elements that showed the story's roots. This story was well-written and had a good balance of drama and humor.

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Enjoyable story

This story is well-written, an unusual take on a post-apocalyptic world. It was easy to immerse in the world, and the details were well placed to make it more vivid. I particularly loved the tone of the story. Marlia's voice was distinct and fit the story perfectly.

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