Lady_V

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Funny as hell

OK, the plot is awesome, I like it. I adore the main character, finally someone who is brave enough to create a character who doesn't give a rat's ass about anything, the most important thing to him is food. I like the description of the battle in that alley, it's kind of vivid, it's great! And I like the reactions in the story, they are real and easily imaginable.
All in all, the first chapter is really good! :)

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