Lana Fox

I write stories about love that will keep you up at night. Powerful men and possessive Alphas. (South African Author)

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Captivating

I enjoyed the story very much and would love to know how it ends.
There were a few grammar mistakes, but it is understandable for a first draft.
Well done, Kim.

I will certainly be following you. ๐Ÿ˜‰

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Aahhh

I really enjoyed this book.
It had many ups and downs, which made it an interesting read.
I would definitely read more books by this author. ๐Ÿ™‚

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Very mysterious.

The story is very easy to follow although most of the time you are quite confused about who might have done what.
I got caught up in the plot and also enjoyed the writing style.

Will definitely read another book from this author.

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Very predictable

I felt like the story dragged a bit in the middle and was quite predictable.
The character's reactions to things seemed strange at times so I struggled to relate to them.

Overall an easy read, but many grammar errors.

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Absolutely loving it so far!

Can't wait for the next update. ๐Ÿ˜Ž
I am officially a fan.

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Very exciting ending!!

Loooved it!!!
Can't wait to read the sequel! ๐Ÿ˜

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More please!

I am seriously hooked onto this book!
Please update soon, can't wait to find out what happens next.

Please please choose Ash!

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Interesting, but not for me.

This book is quite confusing, it starts off with a whole bunch of explanations on the grammar and characters, which is strange, and the story is also all over the place. It jumps in time and there are bits in there not connected to the base of the story at all, like an unnecessary phone call from a friend which also ends abruptly without meaning.
The baby-talk is very cringe worthy and not my cup of tea at all.
I know you said that some of the words should be misspelled, but some of the sentences doesnโ€™t even make sense.

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WARNING: Foul language and blasphemy.

The story is easy to follow and does not bore the reader. However, I would not recommend this book to my friends because of the foul language and terrible blasphemy.
There are also some major issues with the grammar, although it is expected with a first draft book.
I felt myself die inside every time the author used Godโ€™s name as a means of swearing. Even if the plot had intrigued me, as a Christian, I cannot finish this book.

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Action packed!

If you like action stories, this one is for you. It takes place in a mysterious, fantasy world that closely resembles earth.
Suitable for young adults also as there are no vulgar scenes or bad language.

The grammar is a bit of a problem, but it usually is with a first draft book.

Keep up the good work. ๐Ÿ‘

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Chapters missing! ๐Ÿ˜ค

I stopped reading halfway through the book, since there were a bunch of chapters missing between Chapter 15 and 16... so frustrating. ๐Ÿ˜ค

Why would two super hot, brothers in their thirties, be interested in a 19 year old and decide to both go into a relationship with her? It just doesn't make sense and feels a bit forced.

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Badass but sweet.

I think this book is very underrated since it only has 6 reviews so far.
It was very entertaining and I couldn't put it down. Well done.
I would definitely read more books from this author.

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Such a sweet story.

What can I say, I loved it. ๐Ÿ™ƒ

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Not finished ๐Ÿ˜ญ

I loved absolutely everything about this novel, except for the fact that it is not finished yet...
What a major frustration!!

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So sweet. ๐Ÿ™‚

I am so lucky to have come across this when I did.
Short, easy to read, little stories with a happy ever after ending.

What can I say?
Sometimes you just want to read something without a heavy plot line , which you know will end up happily.

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Sweet

What can I say, I enjoyed it. ๐Ÿ˜„๐ŸŒป

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The Imprisoned Princess

I couldn't relate to the protagonist at all, but it is not a deal breaker.
Enjoyed the overall experience, it was an easy read and the story flowed well. ๐ŸŒป

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Many ups and downs.

I enjoyed this book very much.
Although it was quite a nail biter.
Would definitely read more books by this author.

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Good.

I read the book thinking it should end any moment, only to realise I still had like half of the book to go...๐Ÿ˜‘
Maybe it should be split into two books instead.

The story progressed a little slow for my liking, but it was a sweet story.

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Not done?

The story stops kind of abruptly, which makes me wonder if it is not finished yet, eventhough the last update was like two years ago??

The book is enjoyable in the sense that it is very unpredictable, although it has quite a few risky themes in it.

A little too much sex and talk about sex for my liking, eventually you just kinda skip over the juicy bits to get back to the actual story.

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The ending, really?

I was hooked onto this book up to Chapter 30, but then it got really unrelatable.
The last few chapters really didn't seem credible at all and I suffered through it.

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Could not finish it.

I started reading this book, but found many things to be quite unrealistic and after a while I couldn't take it any more and had to put it down.

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Her only memory of her father is when she was just born and he gave her the name Jade....like seriously? That doesn't even make sense, how can a tiny baby, who doesn't even grasp language yet, remember that??

Also, her mom beats her with a belt over her face, but she goes off to school a little while later. Does nobody see the mark on her face?
Obviously the author has never been hit with a belt in the face to know how long the mark will sit there.

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No! More please!

Loooooved it so much!
Couldn't put it down. I just wish Zev could have found his mate. He seems like such a good guy, but his story is so sad.

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Teen fiction?

I've only read the first five chapters of this book.

The grammar and spelling is pretty good, but I still don't know what to plot is? ๐Ÿค”
It just seems like endless bickering between two people, revolving around sex.

I don't really get their interaction either, because one moment she would punch a bruise on his face and a second later, he flirts with her again. It seems very unnatural.

Because of this ๐Ÿ‘†, I would probably classify this book under teen fiction.
(Maybe I am just too old for this. Haha)

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So sweet.

Such a sweet story, really enjoyed it. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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Man, what a messed up story.

This story is really messed up, but I couldn't stop reading it. ๐Ÿ™ƒ
I kept hoping that it would have some crazy twist in the end, showing Guy's innocence.
The ending was so sad!! ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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Oohhh very interesting. ๐Ÿค”

Not finished yet, but loving it so far.
The story is well written and paints a clear picture of the different settings and characters.
Well done. ๐Ÿ‘

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Aahhh! ๐Ÿ˜

I love it so far.
Can't wait for the rest.
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Ahhh, so sweet.

Really enjoyed this story.
It had many ups and downs. Sometimes I even laughed out loud, earning stares from the people around me.
Great job. ๐Ÿ‘

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Loved it!

Loved every minute of it!
Many twists and turns.
I would also like to point out that the love scenes are beautifully written and not vulgar as so many of the werewolf novels.
Job well done. ๐Ÿ‘

I would definitely read more from this author.

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More please

I am LOVING it so far!!
Can't wait for the next update. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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So far so good.

Really like the story so far.
It is easy to get a feel for the characters and picture the setting.
Very well written.

Don't like the blasphemy though.
Maybe you can replace it with different words instead to widen your audience?

Can't wait for the rest. ๐Ÿ™‚

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Teen fiction

I would definitely classify this story under teen fiction.
Good punctuation and grammar. Overall cute.

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A story about teens, but not for teens.

Sex, drugs and rock & roll are the main themes in this story.
It is easy to follow and an enjoyable read, although I am unfortunately not going to finish it because it contains some blasphemy.
I really enjoyed the first part though.
Very well written! ๐Ÿ‘

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Confused

The grammar is quite good, but I have many questions about the story.
Like how old are the pups?
Are they actually talking to each other or making noises?
How can they throw a snowball in wolf vorm?
What is the plot? It is just endless bickering between the pups.

Think just would make a good children's book though.

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Teen fiction.

I would definitely classify this book under teen fiction.
Sounds almost like a short story for a school project.
Overall it is an easy read and light story that could be read in less than a day.

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Very well written.

This story is very well written and thoroughly planned. There are many detailed descriptions of places, characters, character backgrounds and machinery. You have to really pay attention and focus if you want to keep up.

If you are interested in science fiction,this book should definitely be on your list.

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Can't believe it is the end!

Noooo! This cannot be the end??
I need more!

Really enjoyed this story.
It is easy to follow and very relaxing to read, even if I would classify it as a thriller.
Kind of got a crush on James, he is so dreamy. (Slight blush)
Can't even believe Ella for denying him over and over again.

Will definitely be reading more of your books.

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Crazy twists

What a crazy story. Every time I think I know what's going on, it seems to take a different turn.
I'm not sure if this is the end? It can't be, there are so many unanswered questions.

Like why is Hunter even in the story if they never actually meet.

This is definitely not a romance.

Also, I don't like the protagonist at all and can't associate with her in any way. Is she even human? Her actions are almost programmed like a machine.

Hoping that there are more updates to come to bind everything together.

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About teens, but not teen fiction.

The story is very easy to follow and you get a good feel for the characters, even though the protagonist and antagonist have a very strange relationship.
(Still hoping to see how it will turn out.)

The book is about teens, but I wouldn't classify it as teen fiction, as it basically moves from one party to the next, so sex, drinking and drugs gets mentioned quite often.

Although I am enjoying the book so far, it is not the type of book I would share with friends because of the swearing and blasphemy.

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Advanced readers only.

Only 2 chapters in, waiting on the next update.
The book is quite a heavy read so far. I had to really concentrate to be able to follow the story.

If English is not your first language, this book might be a bit too difficult for you to follow.

Also, it might help to put spaces in between your paragraphs in Chapter 2, to give the reader a bit of a breather in between paragraphs.

Sounds like a very interesting story, where anything can happen.
(Not sure how to rate the plot at this stage. ๐Ÿ˜Š)

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Very short, light read.

A short story with a strong message for teens.
Many grammar mistakes, but overall easy to follow.

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Teens only.

I can't take this book seriously, it should definitely be classified as teen fiction.
The way the characters react to one another screams typical teen behavior. Could not finish it.
If you are over the age of 25, rather skip.

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Fayre

I really loved this book up until the end of the battle. Then it seemed to begin with a new story, only to stop a little further.
I almost feel like everything that happened after the battle was unnecessary and made the ending flat.

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The Half-Blood

Loved this story very much, had my attention all the way through.
Many twists and turns, ups and downs! Absolutely loved it.
I have a feeling that there might be a follow up book on this one, can't wait to read it.

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Hunger Awaits

Parts of the book is very cringe worthy. Especially the final chapter. (I couldn't even finish it.)
I would also classify this book more as teen fiction, as no one seems to die and actually stay dead.

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Mercy

The story is kind of predictable with little plot.
A light easy read.

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The Alpha King's Claim

The book has a very cringe worthy beginning, but gets better after a few chapters.
Lots of twists and turns, a very unique werewolf book.
Will definitely read more books by this author.
Enjoyed it a lot.
Great job.

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Ours to Love

Full of emotion.
Enjoyed it a lot. Can't believe it is over already.

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The Big Bad Wolf

Enjoyed it.
Nice light read. Would definitely read more stories from this author.

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Heart of Stone - Book 3

Read the first two books, book number one I loved. Book number two started to drag a bit in the middle, and book number three is dragging a lot. Think I am going to put it down and maybe finish it in a few months.

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Fever Claim

Looooved it!

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Heart of Stone - Book 2

I enjoyed the book, although it really dragged in the middle.
Beginning and ending is good.
Loved the last, super funny bonus chapter.

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Heart of Stone

Looooved it!!
I need more!!!
Can't wait to start reading the next book.

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The Forgotten Claim - Book 1

Looooooooved it!
Can't wait to read the next book. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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The Alpha's Breeder

Enjoyed the book very much.
It is a unique twist on the werewolf story.

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Eclipse Child

The whole story was very gloomy and depressing although it ended only medium sad.
I loved the character of Orion, he was a breath of fresh air from all the negativity.

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Beauty in the Beast

Loooooved it!!
Can't wait for the next book!

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Wolf Whisperer

A very unique twist on the werewolf story, making it unpredictable and a fun read.
I enjoyed it a lot.
Hoping for a sequel.

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The Scot's Mate: Luke's story

Enjoyed the book very much. Just looooove the Scottish theme and hunky alpha.

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Wolf's Fire

I would classify this story under teen fiction.
Nice and light read.

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The Arrangement

I really am a sucker for happy endings. Loved it!

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Arise

I am a sucker for happy endings. Loved it.

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My cruel blind Alpha.

Can't wait to start reading the next book.

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Alpha's Bargain

This is such a sad story eventhough it had a happy ending. I am still left with many unanswered questions.

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Beta Stone

A very funny story. I enjoyed it. The hot scenes is just a little too vulgar for a couple who just fell in love. It kinda sounds loveless, like a one night stand.
Loved the Cynthia schenes!! And the Alpha dad with his ladder.

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Alpha's Mate

I am soooo happy and relieved with the ending. I am totally sucker for happy endings. Enjoyed both of the books very much.

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Alpha's Pet

Loved it!!! Major cliffhanger!!! Can't wait to read the next book!!!

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Tha Alpha's Little Witch

I just love a book with a happy ending. Real life is just doom and gloom nowadays. This book is so refreshing.

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The Alpha's Expectations

I loved this story so much!!! It is sweet, sometimes daring and very funny!
It is officially one of my favourites.
The wolves are also awesome, I laughed out loud quite a few times at their antics.
Job well done!

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The Rise

I loved reading all three of the books and are actually feeling sad that it had to end. (Read the ending of book 3 on Patreon)
I am amazed at how well all three of the books intertwined into one amazing story.
The characters were very well thought out and I almost felt like they were my friends also. Laughed out loud a couple of times and also cried with them a few times.

You are an amazing writer and I am officially a fan.
If your books ever gets published. I would love to buy the hard copy.

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The Betrayal

I looooved this book, cried with it, laughed with it. I just wish Damon and Mae will find a way to be together again.

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The Marking

Loooove this book!!
Very emotional, lots of ups and downs.

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Caged

This story is very emotional, many ups and downs.
I am enjoying it very much though.

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Stolen Moon

I love a story with a happy ending, although it kinda got predictable closer to the end, and the bad guy is really gullible.
Other than that, I really enjoyed it.

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