Laura_Elmire

Aspiring, seventeen-year-old writer. Check out my book, Initially, and vote for it! Also, find me on Wattpad @Pandaness_LM and on Instagram @laura_mrn_

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Promising Start!

What first drew me to this story was the blurb - it really was a good summary that made me curious to read the first chapter. Apart from a couple of typos, which are only natural, I found the grammar pretty good. That's something I really look for in a book, because bad grammar (like run-on sentences) are a dead-breaker for me. Anyway, enticing first chapter - I have to say! I liked the cliffhanger and am now waiting to find out why Lilith was climbing the window! :)

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