LawrenceCromwell

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Until Kingdom Come

This story immediately captivated me when the gods were drafted as real, believable, modern characters. I truly enjoyed the dialogue complete with self-reflections of the central character. The complexity of the plot was well handled and cleverly resolved.. I also enjoyed the writer's juggling of the several plots moving in parallel. There is a lot of depth in this story and the exploration of feelings works to add seriousness. Lastly, I felt the descriptive passages were well-executed. and added valuable texture.

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HIDE ANYWHERE

This story was highly imaginative and fun to read once I got into it. The science was a bit daunting at first, but the story soon overshadowed any science concerns. I really enjoyed the ending and never would have guessed it. I found this story was engrossing and kept up the suspense throughout.

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TALES OF THE UNCONFINED CHILDREN

Imaginative with good,likable characters. Genuine suspense and truly original. This story had me turning the pages and the short read made it a quick read.

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