Leigh Crowe

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Very sweet

Super cute and sweet, I love the characters and they had some amazing interactions. There were some grammar and spelling issues, and the author should break up the text (especially at the dialogue), but besides that, I really enjoyed the plot and the refreshing writing style. You have got talent! Just keep writing and editing! :)

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Amazing!

I was completely enthralled in this story, I can’t wait until the next update. I love your writing style, it’s easy to understand what Angel is feeling, and to feel it with her. There were some grammar mistakes but nothing too major. I’m excited to see where the rest of the story goes. Good job and keep writing!

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Super cool start!

Wow! That was a really nice start, it hooked me. I love the characters’ personalities and their friendship is believable and not-forced. I’m very intrigued at what could be the meaning of this magic symbols and voice, I would read it if you kept writing. I love your writing style, it’s easy to follow and you have good vocab in there. It is only the beginning, but I can tell you have a quality material novel on your hands. One thing I might say is that the character’s are a bit hard to keep track of, mostly since they are all introduced really close together, and there isn’t much physical description of the characters. So far, I really love it. Definitely something I would read and recommend. Very nice job

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Great start

There are only a few chapters, but I can definitely feel the beginnings of a great story. I love the main character, she is relatable and refreshing. I love your writing style, but there are a few grammar and punctuation mistakes (easily fixed and they don't take away from the story much).
I'm excited to see where this leads!

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Secret Enchantment

This book was super interesting with a well developed fantasy world. I loved the cliffhangers, it really makes you want to keep reading. One critique I have is that the dialogue feels a little too forced and unnatural. Other than that and a few grammar mistakes, your story is looking great!
Keep writing!

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Good start

A very interesting start, I am intrigued about this world, I think the author did a very nice job with world-building. There were some grammatical errors but nothing too major. I love the descriptions and I am wondering about how the plot will play out. (also, thank you for the trigger warnings)

Overall, very nice job.

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Addictive and inticing

The author uses poetic and hypnotic language that captivates the reader. So much fun vocab, I am in love with your writing style. One critique I have is that the flowing language can be a little much in places where the reader needs to know something important. In general, the style fits amazingly with the story, but there were times when it was hard to grasp what was going on. Minimal grammar and punctuation mistakes but there were a few. One other thing I would like to add, maybe build up the romance a little more? I feel like we don't know much about Xavier or Xander, so maybe build up the tension a bit more.
Very good read that I highly recommend for fluent english speakers, in all, an amazing first 10 chapters. I can’t wait until the update!

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Great start

It's a great start! You can feel Venus's internal sadness about not being good enough. I'm excited to see. how it plays out from here. There are definitely some grammar and spelling mistakes, but that's all. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. Keep it up Shezz!

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