Lhyric

Kuala Lumpur

daydreamer and fruit tea enthusiast 🌿

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Off to a good start!

Everything's great so far. I'm enjoying the story, though it's not what I usually choose to read. I'm glad I stumbled upon it though!

I took a star off from plot because the story is still developing quite slowly and it's hard to judge at this point. However, the premise is brilliant and there's potential.

One other thing I would like to comment on, is the layout of the chapters. You may want to format your paragraphs better and add proper breaks in between so the chapters aren't just walls upon walls of text. i also understand that you write through the app? In my opinion, it's tough to write on mobile. unless you're just making edits.

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