Lhyric

Kuala Lumpur

Spends too much time daydreaming...

Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Off to a good start!

Everything's great so far. I'm enjoying the story, though it's not what I usually choose to read. I'm glad I stumbled upon it though!

I took a star off from plot because the story is still developing quite slowly and it's hard to judge at this point. However, the premise is brilliant and there's potential.

One other thing I would like to comment on, is the layout of the chapters. You may want to format your paragraphs better and add proper breaks in between so the chapters aren't just walls upon walls of text. i also understand that you write through the app? In my opinion, it's tough to write on mobile. unless you're just making edits.

Read the story now
Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

I don't usually read poetry, but...

This one is pretty good! I'm no expert, but I hope that doesn't void my compliment. I truly enjoyed the pieces.

My only gripe is that there were some "big" words being used and since English is not my first language I had to pause and look up the meanings, which disrupted the flow of reading. They're still really beautiful poems, though!

Read the story now

No badges received yet

About Us

Inkitt is the world’s first reader-powered book publisher, offering an online community for talented authors and book lovers. Write captivating stories, read enchanting novels, and we’ll publish the books you love the most based on crowd wisdom.