Ceras McQuillen

Pen Name is Ceras McQuillen. Just started to write and is looking for any feedback. Feel free to drop anything on the wall.

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Blood Medallions

ALL THE STARS!! Absolutely gobsmackingly good! This book was full of surprises- and girl power that it made for a smashing fantasy debut. Ever since joining Inkitt, I have never read a character as powerful as Diora as she had me cheering her on every scene she was in. Her relationship with her father and the tension between her and Daario was absolutely master crafted. Full of dark and brutal history with every turn, this novel has everything for a fantasy enjoy and comes with on of the best creative fantasy worlds since I've been on this website. But since this is a review, I'm obligated to point out you did an excellent job writing and the only critique I could give you was grammar and sentence structure. Otherwise that, excellent book and I can't wait to read more.

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Amazing

It seems that some of the best writers I have met are on Inkit. And I've got to be honest and the truth is that your character is fantastically written. I love Teb-I, and Lyra is a close second, especially when she turns into a wolf. You cram so much detail in your book along with passion and love that it spills out in each chapter. The only advice I have, which seems to be the majority consensus is grammar and the separation of your paragraphs. Otherwise, this was a delightful read.

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Fantasy Fanatic

In a world that seems to scream Lord of the Rings, Hobbit, Robin Hood, and Braveheart, the author can create a breathless story that transports you into a fantasy world. Young Carr is a criminal, plain and simple, but once his mother is raided by the tax collector, he embarks on a journey to get back what he had lost. Effortlessly, he steals back the gems, and we are introduced to a bunch of interesting characters such as Violet and Lemmant. But I have to say that your story is unpolished, so to speak, and requires just a little edit to make the sentence flow. All things considered you did a great job

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Pulse of Life

What can one expect when a masterful author tackles the complexities surrounding a new mother and her desperate fight against the Grim Reaper. Spoiler, it is nothing but perfection. The story is powerful, focusing on the complexity of emotion in the mother, each one a beautifully crafted layer of personalities that drives one forward, peeling back another surprise in store for the reader. And each scene was crafted with the artistic touch of a writer, and I know that the writer had poured her soul into this wonderful short story. Not only that but the writer went with a gentle calm dispol for the grim reaper which is so much better than the typical evil figure we see so prevalent in your day and age. Last, since this is a review, I am required to give some type of critique and though I couldn't find much to criticize, my advice for you is to use transitional phrases to make your story smoother. Overall tremendous work.

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WOW

Riveting and crushing, I felt every emotion that this author had poured into the work. It's a gripping tale of Lyda, who is trying to solve the mystery of her sister's death along with a passionate romance story with her husband. Each page of this story offers something new, another tantalizing twist in this story web the author has so masterfully crafted. The writing style is on point, the author spins words like they are a weaver, having mastered the art so many times before. Every sentence, and every word is crafted to hit every cord in the body, leaving you raw and numb. And yet, I am left wanting more. If the author has time, I would love to review the book again and add more input to this already fantastic read.

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Rough but definitely worth the read.

Okay let me say that I mean this in the nicest way possible but I really do think your story has potential though its plot is somewhat muddled. Emma is an interesting character and the group is amazing but it's hard to figure out the plot exactly, and it reads more like a biography than a fictional story. But even with that said, I do believe that your story needs some polishing and definitely has potential considering that you are amazing at description. Overall good job.

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Creative

This is one goddamn fairytale and not the pg one written by Disney. This is an original one, full of twists and turns as the reader envelops themself into the tense relationship between the King and Elena. The author holds nothing back, punching through the scene and the reader's heart as the story unfolds, each chapter offering a thrilling sequel to a never-ending tale. Besides grammar, the author has done a wonderful job spinning a classic that will forever hold in the reader's heart.

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Sci-Fi Romance

So far from what I have read, you have one of the greatest depictions of LGBTQIA on this site and was able to make a perfectly lovely couple. Otherwise between the romance, this book contains a perfect blend of science fiction and comedy that never strays from the topic matter, which would be the couple. Overall great job and I believe that this story deserves an original series!!!

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I Hope You Dance

Okay so let me just say that this book is a masterpiece and a welcoming addition to any reader collection. Now you may be wondering why I choose this title for my review and to be honest, it is because your story flows like a ballet dancer. No matter how heavy the subject matter is, you see to keep the rhythm, slowing down to keep the reader caught before quickly picking up the pace with hot tension, a wonderful dance of movement that kept me hook from beginning to end. I really can't wait to see what else you write.

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Underrated

I'm surprise your story hasn't blown up on Inkit and despite the grammatical errors and story line plot, I feel like this is a diamond in the rough. Despite the overall plot line in itself, this story feels like a horror comedy intertwine with individual drama and suspense.

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A Nod to Slasher Classic

I did not expect this to be this good. You perfectly capture the reader's attention in the beginning, drawling them into a story brimming with drama, murder and gossip. Just like the Heart Ripper, it seems you have perfected your craft, carefully taking away the reader heart with your story. The only complaint, and it not even a complaint, is that I suggest slowing down your story.

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Worth Reading

Its been a long time since I read a story filled to the brim with passion and it was an absoulute delight to read this story.

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Review

I don't know what to truly to write about this but it is AMAZING. As a newbie writer, I feel that this story meets all the hailmark of a perfect story; compelling plot, terrific characters, and a unique idea that pushes the story to newer limit. Every page is filled with passion, the true skill of a writer that flows through the plot and connect everything together. And yet, despite the small gramatical erros, the book kept me hook to the very end.

I do however want to touch base with your story and I want to congratulate you for having great representation in your story. Fiyaz is a perfect representation of mental illness, and how people try to help him but he believes that he is perfectly well. On top of this, LGBTQ+ is not the driving focus of the story but yet is represented in full passion that make me so proud of the writers talent. Honestly I cant wait to read more.

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Masterpiece

Let me say that this is an absoulute masterpiece. Marie is a badass individual who constantly fights breaks every single one of society rules. She is quirky and smart, while breathing life into an age-old genre that truly shows the writer techniques. Her relationship with her sword master, Caroline was both heart warming and genuine. As with many story on this site, editing and overall progression of the story could see some work but overall im not going to harp on it because other have already commented it. Final words, this story is great and I can't wait till the endng.

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Passionate

So, when writing these reviews, I never mean to be rude. With that said, you have the most important quality of a writer and that is passion which is 99% of writing. Everyone struggles with grammar unless they are a nerd so im not going to harp on that. But I want to touch base on your story writing, your plot seemed to jump around and move too quickly so I suggest slowing it down, introduce us to this world. Overall thought, this story goes beyond my expectations for fanfiction.

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Passionate

It's sad to say but I am totally engrossed with this intoxicating tale of Betty and Micheal. Built on a foundation as rocky as ever, it introduces wonderful characters whose tales intertwine, creating a complex story that draws in all types of readers. While the story plot is amazing, I would definitely like to point out a couple of little tidbits to improve on your writing that I personally think would elevate your story. One trick is to clearly write who was talking because sometimes it gets muddled up. And finally, try to separate your paragraphs to make reading easier. Otherwise terrific job.

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Supernova

You can't tell whether people are gay by their looks and for the first time, I have witnessed a book that shows that even disabled people can be gay. With this in mind, I am utterly shocked, sobbing as I write this because it's a bittersweet tale of love. Unlike other romantic stories, it passionately describes a relationship without relying on the sex scene to carry it forward, instead focusing on love and the building of a relationship. So without further ado, I want to congratulate the author on crafting a blazing inferno of raw energy that explodes with passion and talent. If this was a movie, it would clearly be one of my favorites.

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Nostalgia

A welcoming addition to any reader's collection of high fantasy, The Blood of the Dragon is a simple classic, eloquently written and yet surprisingly easy to understand, making it stand out from the rest. Cheasy and yet passionate, the book hold no bar, letting the reader dive into a world of dragons and warriors. And while the plot remain consistent, the only real thing that I had an issue with was the overall info dumping through the book and long blocks of paragraph. However, this does not discredieted the arthor for they still told a wonderful story. Keep up the good work.

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Breathing Life into a Classic

This novel seems to live on the edge, perfectly balancing the chaotic nature of a billionaire and the seemingly quiet nature of the girl. Honestly i cant wait for more.

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A Test of Friendship

To be honest, I was weary of this book at first but immediately fell in love with the first page. This stunning novel is detailed, heart rending and an emotion ride that never slows down or seems force. The writer, a brilliant savant of our age, manages to capture 1st person narrative while weaving a tale that is refreshing yet breathes life into this classic tale of friendship to the occasional reader. While editing and grammar seems to be prevalent, it is overall not bad and the only problem I had was keeping up with the narrative being switched. Otherwise, good job.

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Heartbreaking

Let me just say that this story spoke from the heart which reflected in your writing and it was gut-wrenching to listen to the soldier partake in one final last goodbye. Pure descriptive,I think you should work on immersion and plot to helps your readers but regardless you have a future as a writer.

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Suspense

Told in first person narrative, the author know what they are doing, pulling them down a sad and memorable tale. The main girl actions are relatable for I know some of the struggle she had faced and this makes the novel more enjoyable. Can’t wait to find out what’s next in this gripping novel.

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Breathtaking

The dying moment of a poor women is both traumatizing and depressing yet the author seems to captivate the reader imagination, pulling them in a terrifying tale that yanks at your heartstrings. I love this and can’t wait to read more.

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Beautiful

A welcoming addition to the werewolf's subgenre, The Lavender Witch has all the components of a suspenseful novel. The love scenes are perfect and capture the beautifulness of it all. The only remarks I have is to have more emotions to drive your character relation. Otherwise, then that, I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Amazing

Wow. Just wow. An amazing, terrifying thriller in the make that is full of twist and turn at every corner. Overall, one of the scariest story's I've read on this site.

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