Ceras McQuillen

Underrated

I'm surprise your story hasn't blown up on Inkit and despite the grammatical errors and story line plot, I feel like this is a diamond in the rough. Despite the overall plot line in itself, this story feels like a horror comedy intertwine with individual drama and suspense.

A Nod to Slasher Classic

I did not expect this to be this good. You perfectly capture the reader's attention in the beginning, drawling them into a story brimming with drama, murder and gossip. Just like the Heart Ripper, it seems you have perfected your craft, carefully taking away the reader heart with your story. The only complaint, and it not even a complaint, is that I suggest slowing down your story.

Worth Reading

Its been a long time since I read a story filled to the brim with passion and it was an absoulute delight to read this story.

Review

I don't know what to truly to write about this but it is AMAZING. As a newbie writer, I feel that this story meets all the hailmark of a perfect story; compelling plot, terrific characters, and a unique idea that pushes the story to newer limit. Every page is filled with passion, the true skill of a writer that flows through the plot and connect everything together. And yet, despite the small gramatical erros, the book kept me hook to the very end.

I do however want to touch base with your story and I want to congratulate you for having great representation in your story. Fiyaz is a perfect representation of mental illness, and how people try to help him but he believes that he is perfectly well. On top of this, LGBTQ+ is not the driving focus of the story but yet is represented in full passion that make me so proud of the writers talent. Honestly I cant wait to read more.

Masterpiece

Let me say that this is an absoulute masterpiece. Marie is a badass individual who constantly fights breaks every single one of society rules. She is quirky and smart, while breathing life into an age-old genre that truly shows the writer techniques. Her relationship with her sword master, Caroline was both heart warming and genuine. As with many story on this site, editing and overall progression of the story could see some work but overall im not going to harp on it because other have already commented it. Final words, this story is great and I can't wait till the endng.

Passionate

So, when writing these reviews, I never mean to be rude. With that said, you have the most important quality of a writer and that is passion which is 99% of writing. Everyone struggles with grammar unless they are a nerd so im not going to harp on that. But I want to touch base on your story writing, your plot seemed to jump around and move too quickly so I suggest slowing it down, introduce us to this world. Overall thought, this story goes beyond my expectations for fanfiction.

Unique

So far from what I have read, this is a unique take on the werewolf genre, offering a beautiful world hidden by rose tinted glasses. The thing I love most about your novel is the amount of passion you pour into the characters and how much fun you are having writing. Femi is a chaotic, brave girl who constantly pushing the boundaries of what she knows while Nick is an interesting counter, a shy and keeping down Femi wild side. Your writing style is slightly off in my opinion, and I feel like detail can really push your story. The last thing I wanted to point out was that your use of thoughts with the asterisk was confusing, but I know where your head was though. With all things considered, I enjoyed reading your book and it felt genuine, like you had poured your soul and time into it which made it so delightful to read. I can't wait for it to be published because it will be a welcoming addion to any book lover collection.

Great Start

So far fan fanatic has created a breathtaking novel worth every readers time. They are filled with passion and imagination; hallmarks of a talented writer but of course their is problems with the story. For one try to look at grammar and reads you story out loud. I’m not trying to be rude but I feel like this can elevate your story.

A Masterpiece in Progress

Don't fret about the review I have written. I think you have passion and that in itself is a huge part of being a write. Your grammar and writing style are either spot on or unique which breathes life into the romance genre. However, I feel that your story is composed mostly of dialogue and little depiction of the world. So my suggestion is to write more, continue to grow as a writer and I'll be looking forward to reading more.

Heartbreaking

Let me just say that this story spoke from the heart which reflected in your writing and it was gut-wrenching to listen to the soldier partake in one final last goodbye. Pure descriptive,I think you should work on immersion and plot to helps your readers but regardless you have a future as a writer.

Fudge Yeah

Since we both know there isn't a lot to review and the story plot is unclear as of now, but I notice that your writing style is phenomenal, and you have one the best technical skills I have seen on this site. I can guarantee that if you keep writing, you will have tons of reader in a short period.

Suspense

Told in first person narrative, the author know what they are doing, pulling them down a sad and memorable tale. The main girl actions are relatable for I know some of the struggle she had faced and this makes the novel more enjoyable. Can’t wait to find out what’s next in this gripping novel.

Breathtaking

The dying moment of a poor women is both traumatizing and depressing yet the author seems to captivate the reader imagination, pulling them in a terrifying tale that yanks at your heartstrings. I love this and can’t wait to read more.

Beautiful

A welcoming addition to the werewolf's subgenre, The Lavender Witch has all the components of a suspenseful novel. The love scenes are perfect and capture the beautifulness of it all. The only remarks I have is to have more emotions to drive your character relation. Otherwise, then that, I look forward to reading more of your work.

Talented Writer

Rowan Carver is out to wow us with this splendid take on a fantasy world that succeeds in taking the readers off their feet as they immersed themselves in this gorgeous tale. The detail and passion that the author used in this story are arresting and meaningful, with character much more complex than originally seen. Can't wait to see this be finished and can't wait for a movie adaptation in the future!

Amazing

Wow. Just wow. An amazing, terrifying thriller in the make that is full of twist and turn at every corner. Overall, one of the scariest story's I've read on this site.