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Loving it

I'm really really enjoying the story. Its emotive and descriptive. The only thing you need to work on is grammar. Otherwise it's really enjoyable. It has great pacing, I like the characters, I'm looking forward to reading more :)

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Beautiful

It's such an intriguing story. Kyle is a very sympathetic character and you write in such an emotive way, my heart ached along with him.
The only thing I would suggest would be to avoid using asterisk to convey something as it can bring me out of my reading bubble.

Other than a few minor grammar mistakes this was a thoroughly enjoyable read.
Well done :)

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Definitely intriguing

Overall I really enjoyed this. There were a couple of times where I had to reread a sentence to take it in properly which something interrupted the flow of the story but otherwise this was a captivating read. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

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Interesting read !

So far a very interesting read. I've spotted a few grammar mistakes (mixing up pronouns) but they're not major enough to pull me out of the story, looking forward to reading more :)

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