Little Hermit

Land of Sleep

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*Shakes my head*

You can't change Mythology, after all some people actually believe in the Greek gods. they are called Hellenic polytheists. if one of them read the book they would be mortified. Persephone was/is the daughter of ZEUS god of the sky and Demeter goddess of agriculture, therefore Persephone is the goddess of spring. No where in mythology does it state that her father was a werewolf. She is a GODDESS and that is that. In all versions of her story she is described as a WOMAN not a child. There are two accounts of the story but in neither was Demeter happy that her daughter had been taken. I'd read them and rethink the story if i were you. https://www.greekmyths-greekmythology.com/myth-of-hades-and-persephone/

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This is good! >.<

I really like this! the way you write is wonderful and your poems are utterly unique. I've enjoyed seeing words I haven't seen before and finding out what they mean. This is definitely a collection of poems i'll keep on reading.

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Great so far!

I really like the way the writer has written the book. It's easy to understand and its been written to make the reader want to continue. I love the magical element in the book and I like the fact that it hasn't just been put there for the sake of it, it really blends in well with the story. It's really interesting that the Enforcers are the king's daughters and Eleanor immediately attracts the attention of the reader by being completely different from her siblings. I look forward to reading on and finding out why Andorra dislikes the Blakemores and why Eleanor is so different from the rest of her family. Keep up the good work!

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