Little_Town

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Nice story

The plot was very amusing and the words used were great! I personally did not like the writing style but nothing is technically wrong about it, so you'll have to excuse my 4-star rating. Other than that, it was great! I thoroughly enjoyed your story.

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Straight 5 stars!

Hey, nice job! This is very clever and amusingly ironic. The writing style was just grand and the tone added much to the "formal to the point of comedy" style. I sincerely hope you place in this contest!!

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Nice job!

This is a very well-written story! I especially loved the way the demon decided to injure Paul--very clever! I just didn't think what he wrote on the notepad was necessary to say--it was implied. Other than that, it was great!

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