LouMars

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Very intriguing!

The plot of this story quickly lures the readers with an enigmatic world of fantastic creatures and their past stories. Mysteries are threaded early on that peaked my curiosity from one chapter to another and I found the villain so far has been interesting making want to read more of him. The story is easy to read but I would only suggest for the writer to review a few grammatic errors but otherwise, I would recommend this story! Please continue to write this story as I want to know where it leads.

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A Fresh Romance

I found myself caught up with the plot and smiling at different situations during the novel! I really like the easy flow of the story, the peronsality of the characters, and the romances are enticing. I really think its a refresing love story, one that romance readers will really enjoy!

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Transitioning from Romance to Thriller

At the beginning the first two chapters and a half have a lot of what appears a coming of age romance, but at the end of chapter 3 is the event that finally detonates the story and allows to understand more of the characters. It develops slowly, which is great for the genre, but the beginning I really had to push to continue reading on. The grammar is good, the pace and writing structure compliments well with the genre of the novel, but I believe the dialogue could be more unique as it tends to be generic.The descriptions give the characters personality, seem vivid and concised but at times seem to describe something different from the scenerio first introduced by the writer (For example, Kevin seems too grown up in the descriptions to still be at school and eighteen years old with what appear to be 15 or 16 year old girls based on their attitudes. I do understand his background but it still does not allow for the image to mesh well in the reader's mind).

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The Intensity behind the Promise

The story is very well written, although at first it is hard to follow along the chain of character´s names the reader is unfamiliar with. The narration is simple to follow along, but the tone of the narration can be a little dull. In my perspective there is frivolity in the tone and maybe lack of vividness in some of the descriptions. The premise is very captivating, and the situations our main character Rose faces are enticing to the readers´senses as the story progresses.

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It´s own Supernatural Story!

Earthboung is a very well written novel on the supernatural, where the writter does an excellent job on slowly, and enchantingly, unraveling the plot of the story. The story follows the Synn family who, so far, appear to be a family of individuals who have lived on earth for many years, with many mysteries surrounding their existence. The writer does a very good job on the dialogue between characters, so much, it gave me flashbacks of my highschool days and interacting with my friends. In the beginning, the story might feel very similar in situation and some character aspects to other supernatural stories like "Twilight" or "The Vampire Diaries", but after letting myself dive deeper in the story, these resemblances, although still there, fade on the reader´s mind as the plot and mystery of the story thickens, giving it a breath of originality of its own.

Maya, you have great writing ability, you are precised with words and give vivid descriptions. Please carry on with your work, although, this is not my type of read, I have trully enjoyed the plot of your story and want to know where it leads.

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Unique and a Must Read!

Anam displays incredible writing skills and style that complements her overall stroytelling. I found her story unique, captivating, and it easy grabbed me by the hand from one chapter to the next. I will be looking forward to contiuing reading her work. I am sure the Doctrine of Love is waiting to be discovered by the world!

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